We had mentioned in previous posts about avoiding “word echos” when writing your compositions, i.e. try to refrain from using the same terms in a paragraph.
That group of old boys from XXX school look really old.
Better: That group of old boys from XXX school have really aged.
While you are trying to avoid word duplication, don’t create oxymorons too.
Can you spot the mistake here?
“… catch Michelle Chong’s second directorial debut on the big screens…”